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Fionna's pov
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I woke up and noticed I was sleeping on marshall which made me blush like crazy! I tried to get up but then I noticed he had his arms wrapped around me very tightly. When I tried to get up he just smirked in his sleep and mumbled "bad bunny". I layed on his chest relaxing until he woke up which was about an hour later. "sorry bunny" marshall said with a chuckle and smile and put me down. I've really fallen for his smile and that warmth I felt. I felt it the first time I met him. But then cake convinced me to date flame prince and when I didnt really have feelings for him I just did it for cake but then I thought I started developing feelings for him but I guess I was just kidding myself. Marshall snapped him fingurs infront of my face trying to get me back to planet earth. I guess I was in another world for a moment because when I got back to normal he had a smirk on his face.

Marshall's pov
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I was wondering what fionna was thinking so I was going to try and get her to tell me by useing my marshall charms. I began to float around her and pulling at the ears of her bunny headband. "so little bunny you gonna tell me what you were thinking about?" I said with a evil looking smile. I saw her begin to blush so red. "im not telling you!" she said and turned the other way around so I could see her back from my left side. I picked her up by her waist but held her arms down so she couldn't punch me but she was kicking. "you better stop that bunny I dont want to use force remember im evil" I said with a chuckle. "your as evil as a flower!" fionna said but didn't stop fighting. I floated to my door and release my arm as fast as I could to turn the knob and open it. Fionna wasn't fast enough so I pined her again. I took her headband off so she couldn't see when her bangs flopped in her eyes.

Fionna's pov
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I didn't know were marshall was taking me but then I figured it out when I heard waves. "marshall are we at the beach please dont put me in the water it hates me!" I began to shout and kick again. "Marshall Lee! Put me down NOW!" I screamed getting really scared. "as you wish" he said and dropped me. I landed in the ocean and tried to swim up but that was the problem...I cant swim...

Marshall's pov
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I dropped fionna and began laughing but then I noticed she hadn't came back up. I looked into the water and saw her but she wasn't moving. I dived in and grabbed her and began to swim back up. I floated us to shore and propped her head up on my legs. "fionna! fionna wake up this isn't funny!" I began to shout but still no life. I put my head to her chest and there was still a heart beat. I began to press hard on her chest but still no reaction. There was only one last thing I knew to do. I pressed my lips against fionna's and began to breath air into her lungs. I soon felt her chest begin to rise up and down again and she was coughing up water. She then opened  eyes  and I rubbed the water she spit up on me off. "I am so sorry fi I swear I didn't know you couldn't swim!" I said closing my eyes getting ready to be smacked. Instead I felt her lips press against mine. I opened my eye's with a shocked look.

Fionna's pov
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I stopped kissing marshall and was blushing like crazy. He probably didn't like me kissing him because he probably saw me as just a friend. But then marshall grabbed my face softly and pulled me into another kiss. I put my arms around is neck not wanting to let go and just melted into the kiss.

Lsp pov
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I was sitting on the pier wanting to do something cool or blog about something but had nothing! I then heard marshall yelling for fionna to wake up so I went to go check it out! I hid in some bushes and saw them kissing! I began taking pictures and sending them to everyone in aaa!

Gumballs pov
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I was sitting in a chair reading a book and planning my next trick to win fionna over. Then I felt my phone vibrate in my pocket and took it out. I saw it was an update on lsp's blog but I didn't care. I soon saw that alot of prince's had bin commenting on the picture so it must be good. Probably a picture of me and fionna dancing together last night.  I began to smile then I went expressionless when I saw it was picture of fionna and marshall kissing!
0_0

Flame princes pov
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I was getting ready for me and maya's date tonight when I heard my phone vibrating on the nightstand. I walked over to it and picked it up seeing it was an update on lsp's blog. I was going to ignore it when I saw it was about fionna! I looked at the comment's before I looked at the picture.

slime prince: she would be happier with me!
jungle prince: We could have adventured in the jungle all the time!

those were the top 2 comments. I scrolled up the page and saw it was fionna and marshall kissing! I began to get angry and shooting flame's every were! "MARSHALL LEE! YOU ARE SO DEAD!" I screamed! nobody can have MY fionna!
oh looks like flame prince is jealous! lol =P well fionna and marshalls first kiss yay! :) I hope you liked it! remember ill add your OC if you ask me and if you have any idea's plz tell me! plz comment and favorite! :D

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:iconi-hart-fiolee:
i-hart-fiolee Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
omg! I loved how u made it into a love square~!!! :3 :iconk-hugplz: I hug u for that! :iconyuihugplz:
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:icongirlw-thebrokensmile:
Girlw-thebrokensmile Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:}
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:iconraventhedoll:
raventhedoll Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
once he got to be hurt now
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:iconraventhedoll:
raventhedoll Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i love this series
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:iconbacon-queen:
Bacon-Queen Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
you snooze you lose FP, goes for you gumbutt.
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:iconmarclene:
marclene Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
GREAT IDEAS you know just how to get my attention ha, ha, ha *She laughs* Spirit Archer :archer: la in love She's mine 
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bunnybat1000 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Your Fionna, boy if I could come in that story I would beat the F*ck out of you.
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:iconajacollielover:
ajacollielover Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Artist
Oh no it's a love square!
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:iconfiolee4ever136:
Fiolee4ever136 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
ahora si la quieres verdad Flame Prince
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:iconannabelle2430:
annabelle2430 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
fb you dumped her and that was your mistake, shes not yours any more.
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:iconwarwolf1000:
Warwolf1000 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Artist
druma bome
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:iconcourtneycat123:
Courtneycat123 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
FP you ass hoe, of course Fionna will date other people. If you didn't want her to date anybody, you shouldn't have broke up with her.
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:iconfallenangels09:
FallenAngels09 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh so jealous
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:iconsnapcracklepop12:
snapcracklepop12 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
flame prince you are an idiot.
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:iconrts-a:
RTs-a Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
XD Everyone wantz dat Fionna 
Second emote everr 
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:iconcrona-maka:
Crona-Maka Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
shes not yours anymore dipshit!

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:iconstarfire12601:
starfire12601 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Leave her alone cause you broke up with her. Don't get mad cause she has moved on 

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:iconfioleeforever101:
FioleeForever101 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Sorry Matchstick. You lost your chance when you went out with Maya.
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:iconreversalimpact:
ReversalImpact Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Lol yeah and that piece of gum doesn't have a chance either since he waited so long to ask her out.
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:iconowl-lover12:
Owl-lover12 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Did you draw that picture in the beginning cuz it looks really cool
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:iconkitty2face2:
kitty2face2 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
Ohhhhhh look who's jelly?!?
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:iconevenecence5225:
evenecence5225 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
flame prince had his chance he cant just clam her as his
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:iconfioleefann:
FioleeFann Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yaaaay~!
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:iconnativeprincesss:
nativeprincesss Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Artist
Flame prince is jelly jlame irice ps felly
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:iconpinkett1314:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She's not your Flame prince so fuck off =P
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:icontsukune-san4evr:
Tsukune-san4EVR Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
no way flame boy!!! you cheater, scum bag of the of the earth, piece of dog crap, am I missing anything!!!!!!!
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:iconcaseyxthexcat:
caseyXtheXcat Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
HE'S A WHORE!!!!!!!!!
......he'll never get her back heheh
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:iconmusicsteph126:
Musicsteph126 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Oohhh snap, shit's 'bout to go down!
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:iconxxxdaisy108xxx:
xxxDaisy108xxx Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student
YOUR fiona?!! FYI, FP was the one who broke up with her in the first place. I just don't get boys sometimes
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:iconfionna8029:
fionna8029 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
spazattackplz
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:iconpaigethesecret21385:
paigethesecret21385 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol =P
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:iconfionna8029:
fionna8029 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
lolz
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:iconfionna8029:
fionna8029 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
ja ja ja ja jelouse
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luvablemeX3 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
MARSHALL! Hes so SMEXY! Fiona, watz u doin with my guy? NUH UH! [link] Romantic and happy is da least of wat IM feelin! [link] Fiona woulda been betta with FP! [link] ya, SOOOO MUCH BETTA.
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Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EH heeheeh ehe ehe he eh eh <- spazzing out with joy :iconspazattackplz:
That mustve been SO romantice :iconlainloveplz:
I mean a SMEXY MARSHAL WHO"S COVERED IN WATER!
:squee:
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
[link]
This is her x3
I hope she will be Fionna's friend D3D
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:iconicytrus:
icytrus Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
you love her, not love her,then you love her back
wat's wrong with you FP
(like the fanfic):love:
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:iconkitkatkmh26:
kitkatKMH26 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
(LOVE the story) FLAME PRICE I WILL KILL YOU AND YOU AS WELL GUMBALL!!!!!! LET FIONNA BE HAPPY!!!!
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paigethesecret21385 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol hey be sure to read my other stories and my soul eater time story it's also a fiolee and finnceline lol =P
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:iconkitkatkmh26:
kitkatKMH26 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
ok i will!! THANKS!!
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:iconmarahmc:
marahmc Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Love the story!!!
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:iconmarahmc:
marahmc Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
I don't want to read it in the middle of the story
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:iconpaigethesecret21385:
paigethesecret21385 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconmarahmc:
marahmc Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Can you link me chapter one?!
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naciparaserotaku Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it :D
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:iconpaigethesecret21385:
paigethesecret21385 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :)
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naciparaserotaku Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Angel-the-angel Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconpaigethesecret21385:
paigethesecret21385 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thx! :)
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Angel-the-angel Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem
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